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Post by awwa wawa Wed Jul 06, 2016 5:53 pm

Out Of Character

What is your average total play time on our server?: I'm not sure what an 'average total' is, but I've played on the server a few hours.

What makes you want to join the force?: I'm interested in further developing my character there.

Have you been on the MPF force on any other server? If so, what rank did you reach?: I've done everything you'd see on a standard HL2RP server.

What is your experience on HL2RP as a whole?: Four years and 5,200 hours largely spent on HL2RP. I don't find myself playing too often, anymore, but this server seems nice.

15 line RP example as a CCA unit.
** City Eighteen, Nexus, Training Hall. **
** Sector is on top of the breach training glass, looking down on seven recruits. **
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Alright. You seven recruits have been accepted, leading you into a Metro Police Force Unit. You are here today to be trained. Most of you will go up a rank. Some of you shall not. Understood?"
*** Five of the recruits nod, the other two saying "Copy." ***
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: I asume you are all notified of the You-You Laws, The Civil Combine Authority Manual and our rules and laws?"
*** Four recruits nod, three say "Affirmative." ***
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Very well. I shall test you all in the codes."
*** Five recruits nod, while the other two say "Copy." yet again. ***
** CCA-SeC.01943 jumps down from the glass, approaching the unit furthest to the left, looking at him under his mask, about a foot away from each-other. **
** MPF-RCT.29686 begins to sweat a little, still standing there, looking back at the Sector, his hands at his side. **
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Ten-Two."
** MPF-RCT.29686 thinks, as then saying off the top of his head, "N- Not understood...?" **
** CCA-SeC.01943 nods **
*** An hour passes, as SeC moves on to the last recruit at the very right ***
** MPF-RCT.04173 stands sharply, standing to attention, listening carefully. **
** CCA-SeC.01943 looks at her, waiting for something. **
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Ten-Eighteen."
MPF-RCT.04173 says "<:: Ay-Sap. As soon as possible, sir."
** CCA-SeC.01943 nods **
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Ten-Ten."
** MPF-RCT.04173 hesitates, as then saying "Busy?"
** CCA-SeC.01943 nods **
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Eleven-Ninety-Nine."
MPF-RCT.01943 says "<:: Unit needs immediate assistance."
** CCA-SeC.01943 nods, calling out more codes. **
*** Three minutes go on, as the last code comes. ***
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Clamp."
MPF-RCT.04173 says "<:: To deny access to an area, restricting people in."
CCA-SeC.01943 says "<:: Good 'nuff."
** CCA-SeC.01943 takes out the second last armband, as another RCT failed at the code training, passing it on to the RCT. **
** MPF-RCT.04173 smiles under her mask, saying "Thank you very much, sir.", sliding her RCT armband off, sliding the new one on. **

In-Character

Name: Wolfgang Worms
Age: 45
In-Game Description: An inconspicuous, middle-aged man with an awkward gait. He has a rigid European facial structure with an unkempt black beard and a prominently bald head.
Concise Backstory (2 paragraphs, 4 lines each):
My name is Wolfgang Worms. I was born in 1978. I graduated at the age of seventeen, earning my high school diploma. I began to work immediately in order to pay for further education.

I graduated in 1998 from NYU Med with both ABNS and ABMS certification. In the years prior to the liberation, I had been continuing to study postdoctorate at the NYU facility - which was one of the most impressive in the field of cognitive medicine. I was initially relocated to City Seventeen, and then Eight, and now here. I have had no issues with adjusting to life in the designated cities, nor do I have a criminal record.


Motivation For Joining: Increased ration distribution, chance at an increased status in society.


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Post by Draconic Wed Jul 06, 2016 7:22 pm

Your backstory lacks slightly. However, your excellent RP examples make up for it. +Support.
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Post by awwa wawa Wed Jul 06, 2016 7:48 pm

It was in the IC section, and said it had to be concise, so I just assumed that I should focus on skills and professional background. I'd recommend moving the backstory portion to the OOC area. I have a full backstory on this character written out already, actually, and i'll be sure to post it on here at some point.

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Post by Mum Thu Jul 07, 2016 3:49 pm

Why not? I suppose I'm on part with Arch. Accepted
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