Smokey CCA App (ACCEPTED)

Out Of Character

What is your average total play time on our server?:1 hour
What makes you want to join the force?: I enjoy the passive rp as a GRID and it's really fun.
Have you been on the MPF force on any other server? If so, what rank did you reach?:Yes , GRID DVL
What is your experience on HL2RP as a whole?:2k hours all devoted too HL2.I've been rping for 2 years.
15 line RP example as a CCA unit.

<:: MPF. 656 "You're on transfer duty"
<:: MPF. 745(Me) "10-4, en-route"
*** Arrives at the train station, standing in the middle of the entrance, replacing the MPF unit that was already there.
*** The first citizen arrives, clutching his papers in his hands, looking around nervously
<:: MPF. 745 "Apply and hand over your transfer verification papers."
Citizen: "J-Jonathan Alferiz... 35612..."
*** The Citizen hands over his papers as he says his words, 745 taking them, scanning them over, looking briefly back up at the citizen, then down at the papers, then handing them back to the citizen, stepping out of the entrance
<:: MPF. 754 "Okay you can go."
***He steps back into the entrance, as the next citizen arrives with a suitcase in his hands, and his papers in the other.
<:: MPF. 754 "Apply and hand over your transfer verification papers."
*** The citizen glares at the MPF, saying "You know what, fuck you." as he shoves the MPF unit backwards, 754 stumbles backwards, almost on habit, unclipping his stun-baton setting the voltage to high. Talking into his radio
<:: MPF. 754 (Radio) "10-35 at Metropolitan train station. Requesting Unit to 10-26"
*** 754 steps forward towards the citizen, throwing a firm swing at his head, hitting him bluntly, the citizen gets hit over the head, slumping to the ground next to him, letting out a loud moan
*** A Unit rushes towards the entrance, walking up to the citizen, ziptieing his hands together while he is on the ground, tugging him off, marching him away.
<:: MPF. 754 (Radio) "Unit 754 10-98, reporting to plaza"
*** 754 turns off his stun-baton clipping it back on, walking out of the train station just as another unit takes his place.

In-Character

Name: Jay Roise
Age:32
In-Game Description:White|UU approved Jumpsuit|6'0|Brown eyes|6'0|
Concise Backstory (2 paragraphs, 4 lines each):Jay was born in 1984, June 8th at 7:49 PM,  in Ohio, Cincinnati. Jay's father was a lawyer ,his brother only 16 living in the same household as him at his birth, and his second brother, only 8 years old, his mother was a work at home mom, taking care of him and his brothers. Early in Jay's childhood, he lived a fairly normal childhood, he was average at his grades (B's and A's at best)
When Jay was 13, his mother divorced his father. His mother occupied a new job as a regional manager of a concrete supply factory.
When she occupied the new job, she had to move houses, the new house was in Georgia, Atlanta. When their family moved, he had to switch schools along with it. Forcing him to go to a new middle school.
This is when he started to experience problems, Jay was not as social as he used to be, moving to a new school full of people he doesn't even know. He wasn't bullied, wasn't made fun of, just anti-social. His grades still remained average, but he failed in co-op work with other students.
He remained like this until he was 18, in 2012. At the age of 18, he decided to go to Georgia Tech university, working on his Advanced Physics degree. A few months into his work at college, is when the Universal Union invaded Earth. Jay remained at his house, and then he was forced into the near-by made City, Jay was neutral to the Universal Union at first, knowing he could not fight against them, but knowing that if he did, the consequences would be high and dear. It was until his second city transfer, is when he started to become loyal. Jay knew that if you were loyal, you would get treated better, and have perks. This is when he started to become loyal to the Union, earning Loyalist points whenever he could.  Jay was transferred to many other cities, until being transferred to City 17
Motivation For Joining:  I would like to join the Metropolice Force to liberate the streets of our city, to rid it of anti-citizens and to make it a better place, and to help out our administrator in need, and to serve purpose to our City Administrator.

Looks nice, good job. +Support

Well, meets requirements.
+Support.

Heeey, That's mildly adequate and good enough for myyyy... +Support

Your english seems to be a bit shaky in places but I won't let that ruin your chances of at least trying out. You've got my support.